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Stitches
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0 posted 2010-03-12 05:19 PM


I sat in my dying garden,
Alone with the perfumed stench.
I sat in my dying garden,
Alone on my grandmother's bench.

The chill did not effect me,
Though it froze my crystal face.
The chill did not effect me,
Though it hardened my disgrace.

I will wait for the fox to find me,
And devour my throbbing core.
I will wait for the fox to find me,
Because I can't take any more.

I'll swallow grass as I fall there,
With my hat upon my head.
I'll swallow the grass as I fall there,
A nightcap with the dead.

I sat in my dying garden,
Alone with the perfumed stench,
I lay in my dying garden,
With my grandmother on my bench.

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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1 posted 2010-03-12 05:53 PM


So good to see you posting again, seems like it's been a while.  Another well crafted, rich dark write from your pen. Enjoyed!



Stitches
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2 posted 2010-03-12 07:57 PM


Thank-you

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

XxForever.BrokenxX
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3 posted 2010-03-15 05:48 PM


WOW! This is amazing.
I absolutely love it.
Library for sure.

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I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Stitches
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4 posted 2010-03-16 03:35 PM


Aweee thanks

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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5 posted 2010-03-17 12:53 PM


I really like this. Keep up the good work.

-Zach

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

Stitches
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6 posted 2010-03-17 06:17 PM


Thank-you

'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.'

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