Dark Poetry #5 |
Echo |
Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
I sat in my dying garden, Alone with the perfumed stench. I sat in my dying garden, Alone on my grandmother's bench. The chill did not effect me, Though it froze my crystal face. The chill did not effect me, Though it hardened my disgrace. I will wait for the fox to find me, And devour my throbbing core. I will wait for the fox to find me, Because I can't take any more. I'll swallow grass as I fall there, With my hat upon my head. I'll swallow the grass as I fall there, A nightcap with the dead. I sat in my dying garden, Alone with the perfumed stench, I lay in my dying garden, With my grandmother on my bench. 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
So good to see you posting again, seems like it's been a while. Another well crafted, rich dark write from your pen. Enjoyed! |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
Thank-you 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
WOW! This is amazing. I absolutely love it. Library for sure. {~~*~~} EmilyTheStrange |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
Aweee thanks 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
I really like this. Keep up the good work. -Zach Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters. |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
Thank-you 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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