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Dark Poetry #5
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fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
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0 posted 2010-01-21 12:41 PM

not mine
Captured by life
evolved  by me
single   idea
   one stream
    empties into the endless polluted sea


                 drowning
                 thoughts
           waiting for the truth
           to cling
           the ring that never comes
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wicked
Junior Member
since 2010-01-29
Posts 22
Florida, USA
1 posted 2010-01-29 08:50 PM

i love the simplicity of this peice. it's beautiful, but also makes it real, the way it is worded.

good work!

I am that I am,
And that makes it me.
I float like a rock
But I sting like a bee.
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