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Desirer4New
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since 2008-04-23
Posts 57
basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art

0 posted 2009-08-21 03:04 PM


i hate you because you make me cry
i hate you because you make feel like being with me is a horriable thing
a mistake, a job.
Sometimes I understand it might just feel that way
But arent you suppose to feel joy and be happy when your together
Not all the time mind you im not that insane
I know its not perfect and easy all the time
But once in a while I dont see why you cant atleast fake a smile on your
Handsome face
Baby dont you see if you hide the way your feeling from the person who
Needs you the most you can never be truly happy
The person who is always by your side
The person who always listens to you no matter how stupid you sound
The person who knows the ins and outs of YOU
You seem unhappy
I feel as if you've already asked me to go
To leave you alone to watch you grow from right across the hall
Just one smile that all I ask
Not a fake one
I hate you for making me sound stupid
I hate you for not calling me back.

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Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk
Junior Member
since 2009-05-03
Posts 31
Terrell,Texas
1 posted 2009-08-21 04:15 PM


It's amazing how the person who you love would treat you like this.I went through the same thing it took a while but I got over it.Maybe you'll do the same.
Desirer4New
Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57
basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art
2 posted 2010-01-25 01:50 PM


Its really hard to get over something like that. How did you do it?
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