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maryblueberry New Member
since 2010-01-15
Posts 2washington |
Gold tank tops and yesterdays sweet talks i lay here unwinding wrapped in another's shadow hey, little one, the death man is coming soon did you not know how hard it was to get to the moon drunken I stand up, grasping for his hand i fall through the foot of empty space and whispered god as I landed on my face I could see my gold tank tops though I could not remeber the sound of yesterday |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
An overall feeling of regret seems to pervade this piece as the subject struggles with a groggy state. At least that is how I perceive this work. It is good work. |
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