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Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2010-01-06 07:20 PM

I always loved Alice in Wonderland. True this doesn't really belong here but it has a deeper meaning. It might be pulled due to it.
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In a world far away
behind a key hole
down deep deep
in a rabbits hole

Where the colors
come with funny pain
Smoke filling your lungs
Reality coming in strain

In a world far away
Behind a mirrors frame
Something queer happens here
Imagination left untamed

Caterpillars talk to me
With prophecies yet to come
I play with my purple cat
who asks me where I'm from

Blood covers roses
For the Queen dictates so
Play your cards right
And do what your told

In this world far away
Things aren't what they seem
True we're all mad here
And falling apart at our seams

But its a world that I love
dearly; yes I really do
Just a puff puff puff
And you can come here too

SecretlyLonelyandLost
New Member

since 2010-01-06

Posts 3
United States

1 posted 2010-01-06 10:19 PM

I liked it. My roommate last year was a real big fan of Alice in Wonderland...I will have to forward this to her and see what she thinks. how long have you been writing poetry?

*Lovin'YouAgainstMyWill*

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2010-01-07 11:19 PM

A lovely write.

Library

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EmilyTheStrange
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I have a pet unicorn...his name is Flavius, as in Flavius Belby. Flavius does not like gumballs..

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2010-01-08 04:20 PM

Uhh for a few years now. Like 3 or 4 years. You can search for my other work if you'd like. And thank you both.

-Zach

[This message has been edited by Falling rain (01-08-2010 05:27 PM).]

maryblueberry
New Member

since 2010-01-15

Posts 2
washington

4 posted 2010-01-15 09:38 AM

I am new here and I like dark alice in wonderland themed poetry. I like the part about puff puff and you can come too.

noman
Junior Member

since 2009-12-26

Posts 18

5 posted 2010-01-18 12:02 PM

Yes, this is good work. A good read.

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

6 posted 2010-03-28 12:29 PM

The surrealistic images that you have conjured up leave a lasting impression.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

7 posted 2010-03-28 11:03 PM

Thank you!!!

-Zach

Wish I could find love.. But all I find these days are superficial fish in shallow waters.

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

8 posted 2010-06-10 01:33 AM

wow yea you've definetley been writing for a few years it shows off!! I love your writing rain!! great stuff!!

Kate

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

9 posted 2010-10-28 01:19 PM

Thank you!

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