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my dear
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wolfy09 Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 93 |
I love you my dear This i swear So you say For this lie i'll make you pay So "my dear" I'll never keep you near I'll throw you in the dirt Then make sure that you hurt This shows my true heart so cold And yes i have been told So you "my dear" I hope you rot somewhere not quite so near |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
The rhyming took a lot from the punch here and made it sound forced. Fun read though. What did you write it about? |
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wolfy09 Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 93 |
i think i wrote it about someone who got really close to me and then ditched me for sum other girl. but it all got cleared up thank goodness and we are still good friends. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I'm glad you worked things out. Do you often write poetry to get through your emotions? |
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wolfy09 Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 93 |
yah sometimes it helps. sometimes i just write if something comes to into though. |
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