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wolfy09
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0 posted 2009-12-28 02:45 AM



I love you my dear
This i swear
So you say
For this lie i'll make you pay
So "my dear"
I'll never keep you near
I'll throw you in the dirt
Then make sure that you hurt
This shows my true heart so cold
And yes i have been told
So you "my dear"
I hope you rot somewhere not quite so near

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fractal007
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1 posted 2009-12-28 04:17 AM


The rhyming took a lot from the punch here and made it sound forced.  Fun read though.

What did you write it about?


wolfy09
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2 posted 2009-12-28 03:28 PM


i think i wrote it about someone who got really close to me and then ditched me for sum other girl. but it all got cleared up thank goodness and we are still good friends.
fractal007
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3 posted 2009-12-28 10:19 PM


I'm glad you worked things out.  Do you often write poetry to get through your emotions?


wolfy09
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4 posted 2009-12-29 12:14 PM


yah sometimes it helps. sometimes i just write if something comes to into though.
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