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Dark Poetry #5

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Def-init
Member

since 2008-12-03

Posts 186
Toronto, Canada

0 posted 2009-11-19 05:46 PM

Life started disliked.
The punch spiked. A mind psyched.
No light, third strike,
North or South, birth or death
Flames to flesh, ashes to wind,
Time to mend, rivers to bend.
Angels, an angle of reflection...
Not contained in my conception!
No moments, no emotions.
Cosmic motion, cataclysmic devotion.
My mind fluid flowing like oceans!
No spark. Tragic Whispers once dark.
I "Question the resurrection"
quoting 'The Gospel of Mark'!
Stripes, stars. Leafs and red bars.
lands of the full. Population, psychotic!
The brave, victims of narcotics
Explosions and limbs, flags and sins
A soldier, living life under Jehovah
Oil, the spoils! Thunder and recoil.
I voted... No one listens to minorities!
The true cries that defy protection,
Insurance seeking opportunistic infections.
House or condo? Horns or Halo?
Here today, gone tomorrow
living life in the ghetto!

- If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell -

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2009-11-25 12:41 PM

THIS IS AMAZING!!..

GREAT WRITE.. can't believe it's not been commented on!!

Def-init
Member

since 2008-12-03

Posts 186
Toronto, Canada

2 posted 2010-02-07 12:58 PM

Thx for the input heh.
Ya I like this piece to.

- If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell -

Desirer4New
Member

since 2008-04-23

Posts 57
basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art

3 posted 2010-02-25 11:28 PM

flowed beautifully i did not want it to stop i wanted to keep reading. very nice. cant wait to read your next write.

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