Dark Poetry #5 |
Moments |
Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
Life started disliked. The punch spiked. A mind psyched. No light, third strike, North or South, birth or death Flames to flesh, ashes to wind, Time to mend, rivers to bend. Angels, an angle of reflection... Not contained in my conception! No moments, no emotions. Cosmic motion, cataclysmic devotion. My mind fluid flowing like oceans! No spark. Tragic Whispers once dark. I "Question the resurrection" quoting 'The Gospel of Mark'! Stripes, stars. Leafs and red bars. lands of the full. Population, psychotic! The brave, victims of narcotics Explosions and limbs, flags and sins A soldier, living life under Jehovah Oil, the spoils! Thunder and recoil. I voted... No one listens to minorities! The true cries that defy protection, Insurance seeking opportunistic infections. House or condo? Horns or Halo? Here today, gone tomorrow living life in the ghetto! - If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell - |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
THIS IS AMAZING!!.. GREAT WRITE.. can't believe it's not been commented on!! |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
Thx for the input heh. Ya I like this piece to. - If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell - |
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Desirer4New Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art |
flowed beautifully i did not want it to stop i wanted to keep reading. very nice. cant wait to read your next write. |
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