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Losing control
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Losing control |
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Alone in the dark Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 105On the edge of an abyss |
How do I explain that when I begin to feel sad my world turns a deep shade of blue; It results from the memories which return now and then bringing pain and depression back too. You've given me sunshine and laughter and love and shelter in your tender embrace; But in spite of that love and laughter and light I can't bring a smile to my face. The darkness around and the sadness I feel seem to seep right into my soul; I fight what I feel but the sadness persists it's always the one in control. It waits in the shadows til the darkness decends to banish all traces of light; To confront me when I'm the most vulnerable, when I'm scared and too tired to fight. I try to resist but I keep sliding down slipping deeper inside of some hole; Losing a little bit more of myself every day til only emptiness remains in my soul. Angel |
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Desirer4New Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art |
very good write. I can understand what you wrote, enjoyed. |
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20toes Junior Member
since 2009-07-26
Posts 42AZ, USA |
this piece really spoke to me...the feelings in this piece are so strong...what an amazing piece of work here I walk in the clouds, I sing in the dust |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
Lovely closing lines. 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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