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BRP New Member
since 2009-06-06
Posts 8Isle of Wight, United Kingdom |
I am hatred my soul defined. I am misery Are you blind? I am bitterness shall I delineate? I am anguish There's no debate. I am poison Stay far away. I am death Better run, hombre. History is written by the victor. |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
I am...intrigued.. The poem invites a lot of imaginative thoughts one can continue what "I am".. Like, I am..lost don't try to find me. I am...a desert, I thirst, and who can quench it? Fascinating...this poem is. |
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BRP New Member
since 2009-06-06
Posts 8Isle of Wight, United Kingdom |
thank you... |
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prize Member
since 2008-11-21
Posts 116 |
This is a terrific poem, love the style and the depth, although short and sweet-when you can write this powerful with so few words, that is talent to me-P |
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wolfy09 Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 93 |
luv it! <3 |
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loveyourself102 Junior Member
since 2009-10-11
Posts 48 |
i really liked it!!!! <3 |
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Tripp'ncutie Member
since 2008-05-05
Posts 73minnasota |
i enjoyed it. it tells a story with out saying too much....i am... impressed. |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
I like that you appear to have steered clear of cliché, not putting in the obvious solutions that many would have included. 'I feel like an animal, and I don't think that I get it. But one day I'll see you around.' |
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Stitches Member
since 2009-11-27
Posts 159United Kingdom |
This post doesn't apply JUST realised I could edit my posts... Sorrryy. |
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