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wolfy09
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since 2008-06-10
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0 posted 2009-11-12 09:58 PM



love may catch you off guard
so watch your back
and prepare for the attack
make sure to ready your sword

*i know its short.  

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fractal007
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since 2000-06-01
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1 posted 2009-12-29 01:18 AM


Interesting and decidedly... revealing poem.  I would ask you what part the sword had in this poem and why you chose to mention it but I am afraid I might get banned


wolfy09
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since 2008-06-10
Posts 93

2 posted 2009-12-30 08:31 PM


hahaha i dont mean it that way um lol
im saying that you can be surprised when you fall for someone and if you werent ready you have to prepare for the battle ahead. as others say its an up and down roller coaster so prepare to fight
um lol...

Trapped - Nothing
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since 2010-04-25
Posts 52

3 posted 2010-04-27 11:27 PM


What a wonderful read.
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