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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2009-10-02 12:10 PM

God help me
I refuse to acknowledge
and I can't let go
the shame and the guilt
wrapped up in pride
the pain
the anger
and the rage
oh, the rage
it kills me inside
I keep it bottled up
so no one really knows
that I'm slowly dying
and I can't fight the tears
the tears that won't fall
my heart has been shattered
and my soul is so cold
So, pray for me
as I pray for Gods help
I'm my own worst enemy
but only I can save myself

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2009-10-10 10:31 PM

oh how I know how that is.. great write.

-Zach

micecollector
Junior Member

since 2009-10-10

Posts 18
Kansas -USA

2 posted 2009-10-12 04:12 PM

I've been there and know the pain. There are still days some 40 years later that I miss him and wished I hadn't had to let him go.

Beautiful use of words.

Juanita

In God we trust and one nation under God

brneyedgrly
Senior Member

since 2009-06-08

Posts 1125
nowhere and everywhere

3 posted 2009-10-12 10:29 PM

very nice

loveyourself102
Junior Member

since 2009-10-11

Posts 48

4 posted 2009-10-16 12:51 PM

this was so beautiful great job

Mr Naz
Junior Member

since 2009-10-22

Posts 29
London United Kingdom

5 posted 2009-10-22 01:07 PM

I know the pain and anquish well done

MorningStar
Member

since 2009-10-26

Posts 290
Pittsburgh, Pa

6 posted 2009-10-26 06:59 PM

I read it fast, like tearing off a band-aid. Incredibly poignant.

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

7 posted 2011-01-06 11:44 AM

a sad and deeply profound poem...i was moved by your words...very nicely written!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Pixie Wales
Junior Member

since 2010-07-29

Posts 21
UK

8 posted 2011-01-10 03:34 PM

What can I say that others have not already said - very emotive! Beautifully and intensly sad.

My thoughts are with you and my wishes for happier days for you are sent.

Pixie

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