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Dark Poetry #5
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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
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Neverland
0 posted 2009-08-13 01:53 AM


Red rain seeping through the floor,
drying up the lost tears.
Falling through the memories,
Catching what once was in a heart shaped box,
Rusting away to ashes.
Forgetting me altogether,
Leaving me alone.


{~~*~~}


Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}
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Yoinn
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since 2007-08-16
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Michigan
1 posted 2009-08-16 04:49 PM

I really liked this one.

Yoin
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since 2008-12-03
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Toronto, Canada
2 posted 2009-08-20 03:26 PM

Nice piece.
Short and simple.
I like!

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 891
Neverland
3 posted 2009-08-22 12:30 PM

Thanks. I was planing on adding more, but i think i'll just leave it.

{~~*~~}

Lacrimosa Dies Illa
[Oh that tearful day]
    {~~*~~}
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