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th1nktw1ce Junior Member
since 2009-07-13
Posts 24 |
Wasting time while insomnia smiles On blankets warming lies in soft designs, These wanting eyes shut in a fettered sublime, As violins sing and dreams devise Tracing time to thoughts moving rapidly My cerebrum moves into tranquil relativity This treasure, given to drunken parody, Is pleasure given to wishful insanity |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
I am wowed. It needs no title, for it in its self is simply amazing. Words have power, Im going to unleash the power of my soul. |
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Swisha Junior Member
since 2009-07-22
Posts 32 |
I love it.. Alot of thinking for such few words, those are the best.. Nicely done |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
This was interesting. I wish you made it a tad longer though  Good nonetheless. I dont think I have read to many pieces by you. Something I will be changing. - If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell - |
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Bella Mafia New Member
since 2009-08-10
Posts 8 |
I admire your style of writing not many people understand i loved it |
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th1nktw1ce Junior Member
since 2009-07-13
Posts 24 |
my old name on this site was thinktwice...no 1's. there is a decent archive of stuff you'll like and stuff you'll dislike. my e-mail adress which it's registered under is no longer in existence, so I couldn't re access my piptalk identity.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
"Wasting time while insomnia smiles " loved every line of it~~ M |
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athousandstars New Member
since 2009-10-02
Posts 3 |
wow, great job. I love it =D |
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