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Lone-Wolf
| Dark Poetry #5 |
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Lone-Wolf |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
A shallow echo whispered hymns softly, to the children made soldiers of "The Silent Army" "Call me a lone wolf", a Devil’s Advocate, attracted to sin. Ashes flow with the wind, Intelligence so eloquent. Yet in my country, the cloths I wear...same price as rent. I use my acute accent to repent. I struggle to find clues about my origins. Light a cigarette with butane Drink a coffee with Wolf's Bane The Closed captions appeared... as I strolled the streets in pain. I'm angry, You need steroids to match my aggression Consider me Sigmund Freud answering a psychoanalysis question. An Iraq cleric making a rare public appearance. Why is there so many comparisons to sin in our community? Shouldn’t we be able to see the ills of our ways? These ills are used to forge hate To allow the goodness to escape. Don’t look at her, she is thin and hungry... Don’t look at him, he is fat and ugly. It's hard to find a path on this unthinkable road! The feeling is sickness when I see someone's mind narrowed! So I go on day to day and just swallow. Swallow my tongue, Swallow my feelings Swallow anything that can interfere with me at a crossroads. Behold the newly corroded soul, as it appears near the new frontier - If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell - [This message has been edited by Def-init (07-21-2009 09:19 AM).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You certainly can write dark poetry well. Enjoyed this one as well. Carpe' Diem, |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
Thx Myst  I try to write to the best of my ability. I have so much darkness in my past it comes pretty naturally though. - If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell - |
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Swisha Junior Member
since 2009-07-22
Posts 32 |
You need steroids to match my aggression Consider me Sigmund Freud answering a psychoanalysis question. -- That's awesome, flat out.. I really like how you put everything together though, very nice |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
Thx Swisha. It is good to see some new members joining up. Cant wait to read some poems from yeah. - If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell - |
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