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ShadowOfLies
Junior Member
since 2009-06-21
Posts 13


0 posted 2009-06-21 08:58 AM



People speak

and I listen

but what they say

I do not hear

don’t give up

over and over

how can I not

when you run all over

my heart is numb

my trust misplaced

why did I think

it will go my way

why would I think

that you could’ve stayed...

Brian

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since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada
1 posted 2009-06-21 05:24 PM


A very heartfelt first post, and welcome to the forums of Passions in Poetry.  Please check your email for a special welcome from us all here.  Hope to read more of your work soon.

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

Yoinn
Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649
Michigan
2 posted 2009-06-21 07:44 PM


very heartfelt and honest

good work and welcome

Yoin

ShadowOfLies
Junior Member
since 2009-06-21
Posts 13

3 posted 2009-06-22 04:50 PM


Thank you for the welcome. Glad to hear my writing is appreciated.
Thanks again and blessed be.

Brian

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