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Teri
Junior Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 13
Adelaide, Australia

0 posted 2009-06-15 05:19 AM

I wish I could leave all those memories behind,
forget them like you, you who has caused me so much pain,
run away, love is all I wish to find,

learn how to feel without hurting myself,
wish I could escape what you have done,
I even wish I could make you remember.

to punish you, make you understand how much it hurts.
to hurt me like you did gives me pain, but
it was worse that you loved me, and then,

create a sudden hate for me over something I did not choose,
to hate me for being sick, and you betray sacred trust,
and an innocent child's love, and when you,

finally understand how wrong you were, no,
you don’t apologize or try to make it right,
you block it out and convince yourself it never happened.
the child's mind bleeds and you don’t care,
you leave him every night to cry himself asleep.
and when he tries to commune his sorrow,

you appear to have forgotten completely,
and you think the child is sick for feeling so disconsolate,
but finally you have learned.

and you don’t make the same mistake for a second time.
you have changed and the child smiles through the pain,
he knows he can now safely trust in you.

but the memories make it hard,
and they still haunt him day and night,
he sits in solitude, in silence within himself.

I only wish u could look and see what u have caused,
the pain and suffering, you have stolen my youth,
and encouraged others not to listen to him and not be swayed by his notions of abuse.

Teri
Junior Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 13
Adelaide, Australia

1 posted 2009-06-15 05:26 AM

oh by the way
i realy need help with this poem its not realy a poem but more of a story but im working on it.
plz help me turn it into a poem.
thanx

wwzwlmd8
Member

since 2006-09-23

Posts 96
San Diego,CA

2 posted 2009-06-15 01:40 PM

this poem was good but some times i would not understand it and get lostbut it was good and i enjoyed reading it

~Indya

Teri
Junior Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 13
Adelaide, Australia

3 posted 2009-06-16 03:02 AM

hey thanks Indya,

maybe u could tell me which parts wernt understandable, i need other peoples opinions.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2009-06-17 01:30 PM

a porm is a story..... Welcome To Passions great 1st post

Def-init
Member

since 2008-12-03

Posts 186
Toronto, Canada

5 posted 2009-06-18 03:58 PM

"you appear to have forgotten completely,
and you think the child is sick for feeling so disconsolate,
but finally you have learned.

and you don’t make the same mistake for a second time.
you have changed and the child smiles through the pain,
he knows he can now safely trust in you."

Very nice. Great poem. Even more so for your first post. Keep them coming.

- If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell -

Teri
Junior Member

since 2009-06-15

Posts 13
Adelaide, Australia

6 posted 2009-06-20 03:03 AM

thanx hunnie_girl and Def-init
ur right poems are relly just stories

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