Dark Poetry #5 |
Slow Inertia |
Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Go Away go away, i have nothing for you perform your practiced stances of humanity elsewhere i will not act in this pathetic pantomime of gracious generosity go away before i close this distance that you so carefully keep and infect you with my pain before your children learn to play with me. go away, leave me to my slow inertia Yoin |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
I like this! Something about this poem just speaks to me although I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe it's the tone of your words - somewhere between sadness and anger? |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Thank you Rascalx Glad you liked it. Yeah sadness, anger with some sprinkling of resentment and bitterness thrown on top. lol yoin |
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