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Dark Poetry #5
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wolfy09
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since 2008-06-10
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0 posted 2009-05-11 09:19 PM


A chill in my bones
A death bin my future
Where can i get warm?
Where can i hide?

A chill face
A once warm embrace
Why am i chill?
Where did the warmth go?

A dark heart
A happy love
Where is my true heart?
How is your love?

A smile
A hug
Why do i pretend?
When will you learn?

A question
A tear
Why do you care?
Why cant i hide anymore?

A pain
A cold shoulder
Why do you feel my pain now?
Who did i turn from?

A warm embrace
A wet tear filled face
Why do you supply a shoulder?
Why do i ask?

I long for your warm embrace,
and wait for a blush to warm my face
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SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29
Posts 279
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1 posted 2009-05-13 03:10 PM

Loved how the last line tied it all together. Awesome.
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