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wolfy09
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since 2008-06-10
Posts 93


0 posted 2009-05-02 01:29 PM



I hear my breathing...
It is ragged and rough

My vision is slightly blurred...
and tinted with red

Im hiding...
From something deep inside myself

It wants freedom...
I'm falling apart

I scream...
its finding a way

The battle within me...
Is turning tides

i was winning...
now i'm losing

The phyco within...
is ripping me apart

It makes its way...
as painful as possible

Taking me away...
from anyones love

i may die...
at least inside

but for now i cry...
My death is coming...
and the phyco within released


*i wrote this just out of boredom and i thought it might be good enough to post*



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Peanutbuttercookies'nmilk
Junior Member
since 2009-05-03
Posts 31
Terrell,Texas
1 posted 2009-05-07 08:13 PM


I love,love love your work,but I don't think you wrote this out of boredom it is toooooooooooooooooo good .PLEASE write more.
                 -SACHA


wolfy09
Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 93

2 posted 2009-05-09 12:49 PM


thank you soo much and i will write more. thanks for the compliment
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