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pyre
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since 2008-05-16
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0 posted 2009-04-29 02:52 AM


My hands are wax and clay
Lines of crusted filth
Melting if I may
Bloody lines of filth

I have to stop and ponder
At the things in which I wonder
And perpetuate this day
With what words are left to say

A mark was left to make
To pollute the very mind
With an interesting mistake
Against one very kind

A skull is in my head
For love words I used are dead
In clay they're waxing rotter
D*mn this dirty water
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For Luis

Does she pray, or am I prey?  
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SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29
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1 posted 2009-05-13 03:14 PM

This reminds me of a song Breaking Benjamin would write, Idk why, but I loved it.
Mystress May
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since 2007-10-25
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Taunton, MA
2 posted 2009-05-17 05:29 PM

Hey doll... Love the rhythm and flow... beautiful use of imagery.

I enjoy it

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become
pyre
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3 posted 2010-02-21 10:34 PM

thank you
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