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SlowlyFallAway
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0 posted 2009-04-27 02:07 AM


It's dark outside but I stand alone
You lie in my bed but you lie alone
You got what you wanted
Why don't you just go home
Cause you're passed out so close but I feel so alone

I cry inside but I cry on my own
I know how to wake you but you still won't go home
You got what you came for
Then you left me alone
If you're always asleep then how the hell would you know

"Just a few more minutes", you say it and moan
Am I supposed to feel sorry that you're laying alone
You knew what I'd give you
But I still should have known
That once I was finished I'd end up alone

It's colder outside but I'm standing alone
You lie in my bed but you're lying alone
I knew what you came for
And I should have said no
You tell me you love me but I know that you don't

I die deep inside but I'll die on my own
So I'll leave you with nothing, just the words in this note
You got what you came for
Then you left me alone
I thought I would need you but I guess that I don't

Emily Shives 4-27-09
2:05am


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since 2008-12-03
Posts 186
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1 posted 2009-04-27 07:17 AM


"It's dark outside but I stand alone
You lie in my bed but you lie alone
You got what you wanted
Why don't you just go home
Cause you're passed out so close but I feel so alone"

^^ I love that stanza. Your poems are getting a ton better. Good to read some pieces from yeah. It has been awhile since I have.

- If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell -

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