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(Un)Necessary Apologies
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(Un)Necessary Apologies |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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I'm sorry if I'm horrible If I can't treat anyone right I'm sorry if my character Leaves kindness to be desired I'm sorry if my wit Is sarcastic and sometimes cruel I'm sorry if at times I'm difficult to endure I'm sorry if you find That I'm immature and weak I'm sorry that I hardly ever Think before I speak I'm sorry if everything Which adds up to make me "ME" Has ever caused a single soul To find themselves unhappy |
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prize Member
since 2008-11-21
Posts 116 |
Hi again - yes, you and I really understand and can relate to each other. I absolutely love your poem! I feel the same way you express in your poem. Thank you for writing it and expressing the apologies below - I love the title too making the apologies unnecessary, but necessary at the same time - a constant struggle. I feel like I'm always apologizing for something. I find that I try to please others so much I really get what you are saying here. TY ~P |
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wolfy09 Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 93 |
o my god i can relate to this i loved to read this good write. i felt emotion when i read this |
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Rocheal Junior Member
since 2009-03-15
Posts 25 |
Freakin AWESOME!!!! I loved it, and I can relate as well. Great job! |
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