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Immortalized Pictures |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
Eyes whisper temptation. A merciful embrace. Diamonds, like stars viewed as immortalized pictures. An oasis of fiction. Forgetful fairy tales with tragic endings. That just my life and it's just beginning I feel the steel, the fire, the stone. I feel alone, the desire, the appeal. The Northern air, the Southern sea. The Western lands the Eastern sands. I hear Dragon's sing. I dream ageless dreams. The moonlight illuminates like pale flames. Fierce words, brooks and birds Bright red petals seem vexed next to cursed bleached lips. I write poems as if my life was in 'closed-caption' A lethal redeemer, The hand of a greedy abuser. I still feel her, in the spine. God...pray I don’t face you. What you took from the earth, did nothing but shine... No peace of mind, heartfelt emotion. The mind state of explosions. No cure, feeling unsecure... Here in the gutter, here...in the ghetto. See, life is a scandal We react and fly off the handle. All the eternal blessings that follow feel shallow, feel hallow, I feel lost, I guess its fate. I feel like Lucifer running from heaven's gate. Zero tolerance for an absence in the brilliant essence of a constant pure conscience. My preference... in the structure of sentences, feature rhymes on the brink of disaster. They speak of thoughts only told to a pastor. Sinister passion. Clashing like oil and water. Like a clown crying to others. Cascading crimson, unholy treasure. A world so horrific, I hope it gets better!! - If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell - |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
A blend of the surreal and the sinister in this well penned Dark write. Just a couple of the lines I really liked: "I feel the steel, the fire, the stone." "I hear Dragon's sing." |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
Hey Jen. Thx for the feed. When are you gonna drop a new poem? Been a long time since I have read one from yeah. - If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell - |
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