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Dark Poetry #5

Fade-Birds Take Flight

Quail
New Member

since 2009-02-22

Posts 9

0 posted 2009-02-22 06:43 PM

"Fade-Birds Take Flight"

Walking away
through the window
Down the road
chilling wind
Blown away

Thunder strikes
Echoing
Freezing Rain
Creates this stain
Bleeding stops the fight

Enter Night
Where we can't reunite
The moonlight dies
As we all fade out of sight
We watch as the birds Take Flight
Just to let you know what it means, my dad almost left my mom last night and this is about him leaving and how I thought it would be without him...

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

1 posted 2009-02-24 01:22 PM

A good first post Quail. I like the immediacy of your delivery.

I remember all too clearly the day at ten years old when my father left as I sat in tears by the front door for four hours.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2009-02-24 01:39 PM

The loss of a parent is devasting, even thinking about it can bring panic and stress. Whatever happens, it was meant to be, and out of our control, but more importantly, not your fault. Hang in there.

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2009-02-24 04:40 PM

I'm glad you were able to write about this...

"almost" means that there's still a chance
to get things right.

Welcome to Passions!

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" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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KRJ

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