Open Poetry #43 |
perhaps in istanbul montana |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you would dress for the weather of our dreams and it was always summer there which was a blessing to my eyes how your skin would shiver and you would put on my arms and giggle a little kind of invitation that left your heart exposed just under that one button that I covered with my hand and you always moved it aside said you didn't mind my eyes looking there between your beginning and what you hoped would be the perfect ending to our love story and would I mind reading it aloud while you covered your ears with imagination _________________ daark |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Gasp! I think your poems have a rejuvenating effect, because they bring smiles and heart emotions. A D. poem per day, better even if read aloud ... that's the cure! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
beautiful post, lovely read, doesnt seem to match the name and "face" you represent yourself as dark stranger, quite a paradox, loved the read |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms mar, thank you lady love for your eyes here. ___________ Ken. Thank you so much, and being a "pair of ducks" is not always a bad thing. [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (08-28-2008 10:31 AM).] |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love the state Montana, it looks so beautiful and just breath taking Enjoyed the Write Dark Stranger!!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"how your skin would shiver and you would put on my arms and giggle a little kind of invitation that left your heart exposed" yeah, this is cool stuff mister |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
A/W thanks so much for the read ____________ Ms suesea thanks babe you make me smile |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
like turkish coffee thick, dark, you are to be sipped, fortune in a cup. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi..if you would savor me I would solicit you slowly on purpose thank you babe |
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