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Late Night Thoughts of You
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Late Night Thoughts of You |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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I love to watch you as you lie beside me breathing deep and quiet (or sometimes not so quiet) when you finally relax enough to sleep You encompass me I live for your approval though you don't let me be too dependent you know when to let me need you I love you like I've loved no one else and best of all I know you love me the same way |
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MsMelissaMae Junior Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 26Indianola, Iowa |
Beautifully written....oh how I do LOVE, love poems...espectially when your in love. I enjoyed the fact that you focused on his breathing while he was sleeping...I believe its something everyone has done when in love |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Nice portrait of the softer side of love. Enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Rhonda, this is an affectionate write! It's good to see you here again, especially with such a 'happy' piece! PS, thanks for visiting my Puzzle Path. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awww...this is fantastic  glad to see you posting again!  |
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