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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Emerald touch Immersed in Mediterranean crystal waters I feel the sea’s caress upon my skin, wave after wave it titillates my senses till I surrender to the wholeness of its embrace. Sunbeams drink my wandering thoughts to empty my mind. The sky wants my eyes to worship immensity where divine whispers unveil mysteries. Held in velvety arms I feel we are one. The sea, the sky, me and the sun. Out of the profundity of this emerald touch suddenly god rises in all his splendor. Time stands still in this moment out of space, while with a tremor inside I witness this mirage projecting your face. * * * |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, This is a nice description of the Mediterranean. I remember it from days working in Alexandria Egypt. In the third strophe, “God” should be capitalized if you are talking about your god. Love Bobby |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
amazingly beautiful in word thought and photo and you of course |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A beautiful picture Margherita with words to match, love Lindsay |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Margherita... I very much enjoyed your beautiful poem... love RDB PS: only 11 more sleeps until I fly to Rome!! I am very excited! Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Extremely a loving and compassionate write Margherita!~ I Loved this write from you... So descriptive and poetic, talking about love. Very vividly Dreamy!  ARCTIC WIND |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
Sunbeams drink my wandering thoughts to empty my mind. ============== this is quite a piece of poetry. i hope it engulfs your bad dreams and tensions too. clever talks delay friendship! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Beautiful, just beautiful. Kind of like you. I want to walk on your beach. xoxoxo A |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Margherita - A magical, mystical, and most beautiful write! You truly do express love in a most meaningful way. The projection of a face upon a mirage (illusion) is a sure sign of soul/mind love.  Helen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Margherita~ I want to go there !! Like NOW !! Beautiful dear poetess~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, the places you go in your mind are not of this world...enjoyed it ms |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thanks to each of you for your delightful replies. I wish I had the opportunity to immerse in that way every day. It really connects me to upper spheres (yes you are right, dear D.!). Dear Bobby, I am speaking of an "emanation of God", as I believe we all are. Dear Roniece, so we shall have ice-cream together at Piazza Navona? I am happy for you, hopefully it will be a little less hot when you will be here. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This verse alone says enough to sweep the reader up and cast it's spell on the mind... ----------------------------------------- Sunbeams drink my wandering thoughts to empty my mind. The sky wants my eyes to worship immensity where divine whispers unveil mysteries. Held in velvety arms I feel we are one. The sea, the sky, me and the sun. -------------------------------------- I very much enjoyed. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow Margherita, this is one of your most beautiful works. Awesome! Love, Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
dear ..... margherita ..... This is your beautiful heart it sees everything beautiful all the pens break to describes this feeling ..And shys on what you wrote a pen is full with feelings thank you accept my most beatiful pass |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Mark, Eric, James and Nourzihane, thank you from my heart for your loving replies. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Coming back for another read Margherita!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dolphina!  I saved this aquatic beauty faster than I can say "Maga Margherita"!!!Gorgeous! Tranquil! Spine-tingling ending! You are one fabulously talented poetess!  Love you muchly  Angelo Terrestre  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Michael and sweet Linda Angelo Terrestre, I am blissed by your loving presence on this thread with your generous comments.  Thank you from my heart, lots of baci Margherita |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Dear Margherita, I just got late to arrive on the beach, wonderful write and I totally agreed with what everyone said here, you are very talented poetess. Thanks for showing us a glimpse of the Mediterranean Sea. Prasad  |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
As exquisitely beautiful as the photo is, your poem is way more beautiful and I immersed myself in it. If I had been presented with this poem on a piece of paper with no name on it, I would have known instantly that it was a Margherita poem. It has your wonderful identity stamped in it throughout! - Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Prasad and dear Diana, for your loving comments! Love, Margherita |
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byski Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 235Alberta, Canada |
You must live such a blessed life! |
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scorpio eyes shut Junior Member
since 2008-07-24
Posts 31kerala, india |
i could feel the warmth of the sun and the waves lapping at my feet...you've created a great ambience!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear byski and dear Anurhada for your kind replies! Yes, byski, my life is indeed blessed, especially because I am aware of it being a precious gift of Divine Source, even when I have sad moments. Here I was writing about a wonderful holiday experience, you see it was a very short holiday but I enjoyed it much. Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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