Open Poetry #43 |
The Olympic Games |
Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
The Olympic Games The Olympic Games have ended. Oh, what a show it's been With athletes losing gracefully And gracious when they win. Bringing honor to their countries, Their families and their sports, Behind the scenes they mingled And listened to reports. The Chinese are a wonder. They gobbled up the gold, And stories of the show they staged Forever will be told. If only nations followed The example of their youth, We'd solve our problems without war, And winners be in truth. Before the games in London, May the whole world be at peace. May world leaders have learned lessons And formed friendships such as these. Joyce Johnson 8/27/08 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed watching parts of the Olympics...some of the Chinese gymnast seemed young...James |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Oh Joyce that is a brilliant poem my dear, You told it so well, Very much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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RC Langill Member
since 2008-03-09
Posts 104 |
You've touched upon the the true gold, the world record we'd most like to see established is a world record for peace. Every hope is a good one. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Precious epilogue of the Olympic Games, dear Joyce! May peace be! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
It was so fun to watch the Olympics.. This is my first year watching it. I am not a big sports watcher or player for that matter. lol! Mostly, all the teams I cheered for won! Thank you for writing this poem Joyce, it brings fun stuff to talk and discuss about! ARCTIC WIND |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
If only competition between countries would stay on such a field .... Very much enjoyed the read and you the flow was smooth as silk. |
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Newpoet Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 72 |
Very nice, and my thoughts exactly! |
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