Open Poetry #43 |
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Bones and His Blood Pressure |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
In his short, miserable life, Bones never got excited about anything. Bones was endowed with a serious case of low blood pressure. He seldom laughed, and never cried. That’s just the way he was made, he couldn’t help it, and nothing could be done for it. Bobby |
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Newpoet Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 72 |
I liked the tone of this poem and the pauses impacted your message. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
One of the saddest poems you have posted, dear Bobby. No emotions, to survive, ohhhh! Love, Margherita ![]() "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Newpoet, I'm pleased that you enjoyed the poem. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, This poem was inspired by a visit to my doctor. My blood pressure remains abnormally low. It's always been that way. When I was a kid, the doctor would start pounding on my chest to make sure I was alive. Of course Bones and I both want to live. Love Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I wish you to SHAKE with laughter, dear Bobby, so that your blood pressure rises a little ... believe me it is the best way to stay healthy. Taking all things too seriously can have a negative impact. It seems that low blood pressure is a lesser risk factor than high ... Long live Bobby! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
funny though, I have low blood pressure but it doesn't keep me from getting upset or crying ![]() M |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, I still plan to live forever, and I laugh a lot. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Nakdthoughts, I'm with you Hon. I'm constantly upset. Love Bobby |
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