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Open Poetry #43

Like A Tattoo

Street Poet
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since 2002-07-07

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0 posted 2008-08-24 09:09 PM

"Like A Tattoo"

Etched in my soul
Forever in my coloring book of life
I expose my love for her
To any that inquire
With hope to inspire
Our dedication to each other
Is a beautiful work of art
Our love
I wear it like... a tattoo

SEA

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1 posted 2008-08-24 09:57 PM

this is wonderful

Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13

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Windsor, Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2008-08-24 11:09 PM

What a wonderful way of describing PDE (public display of affection)
It is a difficult thing to hide (and why would you want to at that?)

sherry

hiddenIntheDark
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since 2008-08-27

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3 posted 2008-08-27 03:52 AM

This is a really good poem!! Simply amazing!!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

4 posted 2008-08-27 05:40 AM

Very lovely, indeed!

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

5 posted 2008-08-27 07:22 AM

nicely done~~

M

Street Poet
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since 2002-07-07

Posts 82

6 posted 2008-08-27 03:07 PM

Thank you all for your replies. This poem was inspired by the song "Like A Tattoo" by Sade.

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