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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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Sublime Perfection Do you wear sunglasses to filter the shine of my perfection? When you look in the mirror does my image smile back at you? How can you walk in the sun when my shadow is so great? I am sublime perfection. And you are lucky, you know? Why bother to speak, when I have already stated the truths? Your songs are nice, but pale when my clear soprano sings the lyrics of ......... me. When we dance, you float on the cloud of my grace. I am sublime perfection. And you are lucky, you know? I am the greatest affirmation of your ability to make an intelligent choice. I am the foundation of your love. I am the one who brings out the best of you. I am sublime perfection. And you are lucky, you know? Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lucky ideed, Alison. You must be a Leo. Ida |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, your humility amazes me (grin) |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
God/Goddess speaking and wonderfully so ... you are so right, dear Alison. When we look at ourselves in the mirror for long enough we shall see divine perfection glancing through ... My interpretation, as I really believe we are emanations of God. And how lucky we are indeed when we are aware of this. Love and hugs. Margherita  ps: Instead of: How can you walk in the sun when my shadow is so great? I would have said: How can you walk in the shadows when my light is so great? "Love is the One who masters all things; I am mastered totally by Love." (Rumi) [This message has been edited by Margherita (08-26-2008 07:40 AM).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Self awareness and soul searching are the keys to finding the road maps to our journeys in life. Nicely done and I really liked the thought process in this one. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
But of course, you are "sublime perfection"! You, like myself lol, were created in the image of God!  Love your self-assured attitude ~ and sassy spirit! When we love ourself, it is easy for others to love us! ~ and I love you, poetess friend! Linda  |
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