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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2008-08-25 07:34 AM

Life's Run

I ask for silence in my mind
to calm the weary and forelorn.
The feelings rise before the day,
unworthy each in dressing worn.

Shadowing the times with you
when chest of treasures filled the mind.
No questions asked, no answers' need,
no better place was there to find.

I feel the Autumn of my life,
blue the moon that once held dreams.
Those lessons (life) ahead to teach
unthreads the calm of comfort seams.

Why the more of less to send
of message not in want to know?
Where is there? And when is now?
And what is next to learn, to sow?

Voices still invade the mind,
those thoughts forever nagging one.
Looking out from this within
the fog needs lifting from this run.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2008-08-25 09:11 AM

Naked One, as per usual your poetry is rife with memorable lines to quote.

"I feel the Autumn of my life,
blue the moon that once held dreams."

May the fog lift and let your dreams come shining into reality.

Linda

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-08-25 09:25 AM

Your melancholic voice is tenderly expressed here, dear Maureen.
May clarity come as a precious gift.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2008-08-25 12:19 PM

Hi Maureen, "Blue the Moon that once held dreams." Wow, isn't that the truth.
Peace.
Sandra

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-08-25 06:30 PM

NIce writing...James

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2008-08-25 07:38 PM

what a great line [and one I can 'relate' to all to well !]:

"I feel the Autumn of my life,
blue the moon that once held dreams."

applause for this introspective; reflective and emotive penning!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2008-09-13 08:49 PM

I ask for silence in my mind
to calm the weary and forelorn.
The feelings rise before the day,
unworthy each in dressing worn.

Shadowing the times with you

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Maureen~
Your words have a calming effect and still,
they leave me breathless.

Endearing and heartfelt!!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2008-11-03 05:23 PM

Still feeling this~~

Thank you, friends

M

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