Open Poetry #43 |
Tangible |
Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Rapid succession Truly immersed Internal professing Completing the versed Catching mere thought Glimpse of a sigh Tangibly caught Questioning why End of beginning Starting as finished Soul rendered penning Heart full replenished... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- copyright 2008 vduna Inspired-8 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sounds good to my ears, dear Vic. Lovely. Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Soul rendered penning" ~ indeed! And rendered succinctly but ever so effectively. "Heart full replenished." ~ EA |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Enjoyed the read, Vic! Helen |
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