Open Poetry #43 |
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Appalachian Autumn Sunrise |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
Appalachian Autumn Sunrise A solitary loon cry echo-glides the mountain wilderness edge, on a tenuous mystic breezeā¦ where final fleeting night-shadows dance with fading memories and dreams, (along translucent moonset sands) to vanish in the rising mists and flowing dawn that glide across this lambent lake of new-morning promises. --- b. e. adams (8/23/08) |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Most any write with a loon in it gets my applause, but this...is truly exquisite! |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
enjoyed this one, a lot of feeling in these words. Denis |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, This excellent poem brings to mind my first encounter with a loon. It scared me half to death. Bobby |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, I swear that we are thinking the same way. I wrote a poem about September morning and came in later and saw yours. Last night I was driving home thinking about the cry of a loon and writing a poem in my head -- and here it is! I so much enjoy you and your poetry. Alison |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What a beautiful sunrise this must be. Ida |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
So greatly enjoyed that I would like to live in this landscape! |
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