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Rocky
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since 2008-06-12
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0 posted 2008-08-23 01:41 PM


I have a power that no other has.
it resides somewhere deep within my heart.
this power of mine can do things beyond belief.
it can build and it can tear apart.

I have a power stranger than life.
a power greater than you could ever bear.
it can even make you my wife.
so just be prepared.
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1 posted 2008-08-24 03:20 AM

Dunno if I would want to be someone's wife based on their 'power'.  It's an interesting concept to consider - what kind of power is powerful enough to win over another?  The power of love? Somehow, I don't think that is the power being addressed in this poem.  I think it is about mental power - and that, to me, is not power to base any relationship on.

Got me thinking here.

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