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nourzihane
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since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

0 posted 2008-08-21 12:36 PM

don't be sad my self you don't blamable
Your fault that you rebelled on your dream and forgot that the destiny which threw you yesterday will never forgive you today and will never smiles tomorrow
Engraved Equation on your forehead the time will never erases it
so confess that you try to rebel
comeback to your fact and drink bitter of defeat
Philosophy of Miserables in this life is

......I suffer so i'm found.....

You have to harmony more with the wings of darkness
And dream maybe the smile flirts your lips
dream my self as you like as long as your dream in the darkness
there is only one reality in this life is

.....dream of Miserables is madness....

nourzihane

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-08-21 05:26 PM

Dear nourzihane, I read this several times to absorb the feeling it gives me. I think the original version in your language must be excellent as it is intriguingly captivating even in English despite the linguistic imperfections.
You know my opinion of darkness, it is there to make the light shine brighter through its density. Write of it, it will help you to get over it, I believe. You are meant to be happy. But then it is true too, that there is a certain kind of melancholic beauty in sadness. I remember one of Eric's poems about this, must go find it.
You wrote a very profound piece of poetry and I do love it.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

[This message has been edited by Margherita (08-21-2008 06:12 PM).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2008-08-21 05:49 PM

......I suffer so i'm found.....

Amazing line, Nourzihane. Extremely profound.

Write on!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2008-08-21 06:01 PM

If Margherita reads a poem before I do, she always takes the words right out of my mouth! ~ Well, not exactly. Her words are better!

I echo each of her sentiments!

Giving you a warm hug,

EA

nourzihane
Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

4 posted 2008-08-22 07:21 AM

margherita....sunshine....Earth Angel

i respect your opinion and i appreciate it

thank you for you wonderful pass

nourzihane

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2008-08-24 02:27 AM

quote:
You have to harmony more with the wings of darkness
And dream maybe the smile flirts your lips
dream my self as you like as long as your dream in the darkness
there is only one reality in this life is

.....dream of Miserables is madness....

Such wonderful writing. I have read the entire poem several times and it continues to call me back.

Alison

nourzihane
Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 254
Algeria

6 posted 2008-08-24 03:40 AM

Dear..... Alison....

thank you for your wonderful pass

my respect

nourzihane

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