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Open Poetry #43
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0 posted 2008-08-23 12:46 PM


Splendid notion
Hope instills
Complete abandon
The heart feels
Never worry
Gone the pain
Always surely
Love remains
Such a notion
To exist
Infinite emotion

Forever...... I shall miss...

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1 posted 2008-08-23 01:12 PM

This sounded so beautiful and peaceful and happy . . . until I got to the end and pow! it changed to being soooo sad, but still beautiful . . . and peaceful too, but in a different and very powerful and spiritual way.  

- Owl
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