Open Poetry #43 |
September Morning |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
September Morning Silver dew forming on the morning meadow. Smoke ascending in slow spiral-dance with the cool rising mist to a one-bird song of Summer passing... in slow surrender to the serene, silent, dazzling, sunlit clarity of this fine September dawn. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I can't wait for FALL!! loved this |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write Bruce!-- I too, love the Fall, I am excited as well!!! ARCTIC WIND |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
September always seems to bring the most pleasant weather, and your words have me staring at my calendar in anticipation. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This poem reminds me of how happy I am that fall is coming. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your longing for September is felt in this beautiful anticipation, dear Bruce. I can't see any signs of fall yet here ... we are burning, boiling, melting ... Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, September is a good time of year. It's not too hot, and not too cold. Bobby |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
I love September too, and this one fine write; WOW!!!!!!!! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love watching the mist rise off the river on early September mornings. I love listening to the Robins in the chokecherry trees, eating berries before flying south. I love hearing the cranes and Canada geese overhead. I love the colors of the leaves. I love frosty, sunny mornings. I love fall. A |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
are we there yet? sure felt like it this past week M |
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Gaelynsgirl Member
since 2008-07-18
Posts 175Ont. Canada |
An inspiration to memories Bruce. A lovely breath of words... L. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I came back to this because I love it so much. It really sounds like my September mornings. It's a keeper, Bruce. Alison |
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DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
I loved this one, i like september, i love it. not only because my birthday is on september 13th but because..i don't know, something in the air is in september, not only spring something warm every year i enjoy september very much. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
September is my favorite month, all the fall colors, leaves...pumpkin spice smell floating through my home, the smell of the fresh rain, mixed with leaves... a wonderful poem about autumn.... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love October too! Just beautiful SHDP! ARCTIC WIND |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
One can really feel the light change to autumn while reading this. It's marvelous. |
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