Open Poetry #43 |
Gypsy Moon |
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Gypsy Moon The clear-bright eastern moon floats among these gentle mountains across a sunset-mirror lake, (parting silent shadows and the evening spirit-wind) its soft light broad and healing, illuminates the farthest reaches of this empty forest and the troubled mind… offering tender comfort without pretension, then simply journeys on in eternal westward wander... following the footsteps of the sun. ---b. e. adams (7/11/08) [This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (07-12-2008 04:33 PM).] |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You reminded me how much I miss the moon in the summer. Thank you for sharing yours. Alison |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
its soft light broad and healing, illuminating the farthest reaches of this empty forest and the troubled mind… offering tender comfort without pretension, I am drinking avidly at the well of your soothing beautiful words, dear Bruce. Love, Margherita |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
The rythms of this poem speak of eternity. Congratulations on a perfect 350th, Poet! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"offering tender comfort without pretension" Nature always does this for me. |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
I had to return for another reading of this poem. It is mighty fine work, Poet. In addition to its content, of course, I'm rather captivated by the choreography/motion of it. Well done! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Imagery ARCTIC WIND |
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