Open Poetry #43 |
The seesaw |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Grey sky foretells an upcoming storm in my teacup of personal drama but this just a hiccup of life’s design that seesaws my inner beliefs. Up/down and it’s not like a joyride that lightens the burdens inside but a means to believe in the good/bad and the duality of humankind. It’s the spirit that bears down love from the air of unconsciousness and the legs of the dense physical that pushes it back to the store of it all. Like attracts like but love doesn’t care who receives its constant bear down because it’s programmed to be there until it is activated. But legs, the legs of who we are now can’t conceive of pure harmony and unbalanced push up enchained in a bubble of nonchalance. Please pity the ones who love in the air of unconsciousness because they are denied civil rights by the legs of muscle, skin, bone and so pity me because I love you and my legs have grown tired, you know! Helen / 19 August 2008 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your title fits your words so well ... I learned the new word "seesaw" right now. I love it. Again your ponderings are very captivating to my ears and to my soul. To be aware of the ways of love is the first step to live it in its whole potential, I believe. And your legs will carry you without getting weary. No, there is no reason to pity you, for you know about love's nature, you ARE LOVE. Excellent as always ... Love and hugs. Margherita |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
ah (((Honeybunch))) You are such a fine fulcrum ::smiles:: Thank you for the ride. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you, Margherita. I'm still learning but have today learnt that love doesn't only bear down but lifts up to another plane - the plane where truth is known. Larry - Thank you. Up/down/round - It's all experience. Thanks Helen |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
yes lol The experience of there being an "experiencer" experiencing experiences...is a wonderful experience ::smiles:: |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Now you're getting just as confused as me ... but you're obviously in a good mood and that's good or as good as good gets when the mood is good. Helen |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Your writting has grown in such depth and understanding Helen. You are a true master poet. Love, Eric |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Sometimes I don't know things until people tell me but even then I find them hard to believe. That's not to say, however, that I'm not gracious enough to be appreciative and grateful for the input. Thank you, Eric, for telling me! Love Helen |
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