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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-08-18 06:57 AM

mornings are at the windows again
looking into each others eyes
as if they were us really
and not somebody else's new day

I can hear your coffee sounds
on your lips as you smile
and know my finger words birthing
on the keys that start your wanting

and you see my mind too
the white sail on blue ocean
drifting into the cove of you
where you left your sandbars out

and a welcome mat written down
on the sand castles doorway
by your freshly kissed finger tip
as you were sleeping in storms

and woke wanting more of those dreams
_______________

daark

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2008-08-18 08:50 AM

"and a welcome mat written down
on the sand castles doorway
by your freshly kissed finger tip
as you were sleeping in storms

and woke wanting more of those dreams"

such perfection

good morning D

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

2 posted 2008-08-18 10:13 AM

as usual intense

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2008-08-18 11:24 AM

Ms suesea, you bless me babe

__________

Friend poddarku, humble thanks.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2008-08-18 07:29 PM

quote:
and you see my mind too
the white sail on blue ocean

Another sigh-stirrer, dear D.! Love it all and especially the two lines I quoted.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2008-08-19 05:51 AM

ms mar, thanks babe

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2008-08-19 09:46 AM

Water dreams...
what a way to wake up.
Here's your cuppa.

Thank you for this lovely.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2008-08-19 10:27 AM

Ms sun, thanks for the cups in the mornings babe. You smile me.

Indigo
Senior Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 602

8 posted 2008-08-19 01:47 PM

I can hear your coffee sounds
on your lips as you smile
and know my finger words birthing
on the keys that start your wanting

telepathic thoughts
permeate the summer winds
gently like dog sighs.

Indigo

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2008-08-19 02:04 PM

Ms indi.

I can almost hear you say that. Hintingly suggested.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2008-08-20 03:48 AM

D,

This poem is more than a keeper. It is magic - and like all magic it needs to be tended and treasured. It's beautiful in the most beautiful way.

A

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2008-08-20 06:11 AM

ms ali-san, thank you lil lady for the touch

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