First Love, Everlasting Love

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Open Poetry #43

First Love, Everlasting Love

Lincoln
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since 2007-12-03

Posts 62
Earth

0 posted 2008-07-11 05:49 PM

Her smile lit up the dark sky
My first love, still so beautiful
Oh I loved her so
Oh how my road is paved
Paved with love
She'll stay in my memories
For we went our seperate ways

"Be thou the rainbow in the storms of life. The evening beam that smiles the clouds away, and tints tomorrow with prophetic ray." -- Lord Byron

Danny Cobb
Member

since 2008-07-09

Posts 74

1 posted 2008-07-11 08:29 PM

a sweet ode to love-love lost, yet ever retained in a special place in our heart---Very Nice!
simple yet sublime!

Danny

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2008-07-11 10:44 PM

This is so sweet. I think many of think of our first loves with the same sentiments.

Alison

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-07-12 04:59 AM

Very lovely. And you are so right, we can never forget the first motions of our hearts and always cherish those moments of emotional "discovery".

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2008-07-12 09:32 AM

I will never forget my first love either! Thanks for stirring up those glorious memories!

I enjoyed reading about yours!

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