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Mister McFee and Miss McGee
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Mister McFee and Miss McGee |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio 
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Mister McFee and Miss McGee In the darkened corner of the neighborhood bar are Mister McFee and Miss McGee. They're saying come on over here and see what we see. Now what could this possibly be? Curiosity is over taking me. So I go to have a look see. Mister McTee do you see what I see? I look in confusion- This cannot be- My eyes must be fooling me. What is this I see Miss McGee? Yes Mister McTee a dancin’ flea singin’ merrily. Mister McZee coming through the door- Where is that dancin’ flea? Your wife is a comin’ So you better flee. Out the door he runs. For his wife has a gun. If you should be a dancin’ flea. Don’t be a goin’ to the bar for dancin’ and fun. Cause if your a havin’ too much fun. You’ll be a little ol’ flea a havin’ to flee and you’ll not be a singin’so merrily. Hugs BonBon  [This message has been edited by Bonnie j (08-17-2008 09:17 AM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bonnie j, I like this an awful lot. It made me laugh. In the line: "Cause if your a havin’ to much fun." that should be "too" instead of "to". Don't feel bad, many people have trouble with "to" and "too". Picky Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Now that was a true "Bonbon", just too cute! It's so nice to have you back, Bonnie! They should all have some fun, without fearing the gun! But jealousy isn't a rational feeling, so better be on guard! Love, Margherita  |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Hi there Mr. Picky LOL Yepper me and my to, too's are always in a whirl no matter how fast I twirl the ole ink pen. Glad I gave you a laugh. Hugs BonBon |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Margherita Thank you for reading my silliness once again. I'll have to post more adventures of Mr. Flea the dancin' flea. He's a character for sure. See Ya Hugs BonBon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ You ALWAYS give us a cute *giggle*~ Enjoyed the adventure~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Hey Ms.Marge Thank you for reading and catching the word that is messed up in my silly head. When I write I never see my mistakes. I can catch someone elses when I read, but not my own. Blind in one eye and can't see out of the other. Glad this gave you a smile. Hugs Bonbon |
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