Open Poetry #43 |
come to me in laughter |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
those saturday slices of time when nothing else matters like socks matching in boots and you came to that place again knowing I was wanting you at my window but it was to easy just to stop so you just drove around the block in your funny shoes like at rincon and went slow enough for my eyes to hear the honking of your horn and the heartbeats of something mckuen that wore like my shirt on your shoulders and I dreamed of your whisper kiss sounds ________________ daark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
those saturday slices of time when nothing else matters like socks matching in boots and you came to that place again knowing I was wanting you at my window but it was to easy just to stop so you just drove around the block in your funny shoes like at rincon and went slow enough for my eyes to hear the honking of your horn and the heartbeats of something mckuen that wore like my shirt on your shoulders and I dreamed of your whisper kiss sounds good grief darkdaddy guy you sure do know how to make a woman sigh.. sighhhhhh always, a treat, D |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D You make me stop and take a moment to fall into your poetry. You never fail to stop me when I am sailing by in my typical hurry way. I love the sound of the laughter and may your socks always be mismatched in your boots. What a charming thought. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Like dear Donna I would want to quote the whole poem, because it is so full of warm sunshine that penetrates the pores and brings moans of pleasure ... makes me want to stretch and sigh. Just a top performance, dear D.! Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms donna...thank you sweet lady for the touch and heart sighs.. ________________ ms ali-san, thank you for the eyes where they belong.. __________________ ms mar, thank you lady friend for wearing my words this am |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
et pour moi? I loved every line Mr Daark.. I hope you get to miss me a little while I'm away! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b...you will be missed...and I will smile for you as you enjoy your time, thanks ms |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Diving today and finding this gem was fun! Only no socks at all are better than mismatched ones ... Love, Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice touch with the mckuen reference...once again, a quality write with lots of layers...enjoyed |
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AcousticPen Junior Member
since 2008-12-01
Posts 13Florida USA |
I like the first stanza "when nothing else matters like socks matching in boots" that really gave me a great window into the meaning of what you were writing. Colorful vocabulary with a link for the less witted into your chain of thought really seemed to be what made this peice the most enjoyable to me. Sorry I cant make referance to your other works like some of these ladies but I am new lol. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...thanks babe _______________ steavenr, thanks amigo for the touch ________________ acoustic...Thanks for the read and vibe..and welcome to ElPip |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I always enjoy your sensual humor~~ the mismatched socks made me think of all the times when I... M |
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shortsleeves Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125Franklin Tennessee |
I enjoyed that one! Thanks. Hal |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Stranger - an excellent write, enjoyed reading this... BC |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms MMs thanks babe _______________ shortsleeves, humble thanks _________________ BC, thanks amigo |
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