Open Poetry #43 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the color of your eyes then when mine are closed under memories and are looking into your wanting to again like mirror mouthed kisses my mind is handy to touch your hair there the raven blond crimson or you in shadows touching your shoulders lower than a smile wearing only the dark side of sighs and then something tender wet like tears writes poems on tomorrow paper thin skin see thru tattoos make us both uneasy, easily like erasers without intentions to smudge forgetting how we fit between our own lines _____________ daark |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D This is beautiful writing. A |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i love your poetry all of it i read every one |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"forgetting how we fit between our own lines" An unforgettable line, mon ami. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san...thank you little one __________________ ms slick, mmmmmm you smile me babe, thank you _______________ ms midnite..thank you lady friend |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
what a captivating title, and then you treat the reader to such wonderful lines as this: "wearing only the dark side of sighs" |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
yes... beautiful! Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
untasted, unread her heart of well-creased pages elusive, erased. Indigo |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr..thanks amigo _______________ ms r&b, thanks lady friend ________________ ms indi...and you were there again thanks babe |
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