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gdcod2player Member
since 2008-07-26
Posts 117 |
Cheated by every thing but the mud I went to find someone that understands But that seemed like I asked for too much I need to look down the road For something to make me go The life I want is out there Maybe it’s too far I hope I can drive through it all So I can reach my destination Every one has a story to tell But no will listen to The words other people have to say Until the words come crawling back It doesn’t have their attention The reasons I gave for every crash Isn’t a lie but every one keeps saying I’m crazy The only thing that means anything is gone And now I just have empty words That she’ll never learn I have to lie Till I’m gone I stand Alone till the end of everything [This message has been edited by gdcod2player (08-14-2008 02:47 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
To be able to listen is indeed a very special gift. The loneliness is felt through your words. Write your emotions and trust your divine nature to guide you on your journey. Share your love unconditionally and trust the new opportunities of every new day. Love, Margherita |
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Kalandria Junior Member
since 2006-05-23
Posts 44Yorkshire, England |
I feel for your loss. I think we all know how it sometimes feels as though we speak without being heard and you've expressed this in a very heartfelt poem. Thankyou. |
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