Open Poetry #43 |
...bones knew nothing (with thanks to Bobby for the inspire) |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Her bones knew nothing Of history They do not recall Things gone by They are after all Gone. ….I have no need of this Her bones knew nothing Of memories And how they haunt Dead is in fact, Dead. Ashes to ashes…… Her bones knew nothing Of regret Every step is a lesson Every word, every action A choice. .....Life is about living Her bones knew nothing Of tomorrow It would be faced Like each before With purpose and direction. don’t show me the way, I’ll find my own..... ~SEA~ *thank you Bobby for the inspiration in your title /pip/Forum106/HTML/000680.html |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
SEA... I think you are an inspiration! This is very beautiful... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I love this, Sea. Ida |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lovely, SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ *soft smiles* here~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear SEA, This is a good picture and poem combination. I like it loads. What a lovely young lady. Thanks for mentioning my Bones poem. Love Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (08-10-2008 09:30 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: You were beautifully inspired and you are powerfully determined. Very much enjoyed this insightful write. Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Susan, you make it so easy....well done. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
nice description of how this persona has arrived at this particular stage of her life |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
A very good Write SEA! Wonderful ARCTIC WIND |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wow, SEA!! I so liked this!!! Took over as my favorite of yours... jimmy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My bones can do tricks! Really! I have a double-jointed hip, but I'm afraid to do that trick now, because bones might not remember, but muscles? heh I don't even wanna think about it... *touching the screen* You are sweeter than sugar cane. |
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Danny Cobb Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 74 |
how awesome, your poem-inspired Poem! how expressive and full of meaning! I enjoyed reading it! danny cobb |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I just wanted to say thank you to all. and Karen, you got strong bones woman |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I really need some inspiration like this! love you |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
*chuckling at Karen* SEA?... Everytime I read you, I'm reminded that I need to read you more... This is lovely... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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Mountain Goat Junior Member
since 2008-04-06
Posts 32High Places |
Oooh I like this, very striking indeed |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
susan- beautiful read! this had a beautiful sadness to it... your writing always touches me deep within. The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return. Eden Ahbez |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Really enjoyed this SEA, beautiful wording. A very unique style as well. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
to be inspired is the greatest gift! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, I think about your bone now something about jumping..no that is a rope huh..oh well, enjoyed the poem |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan, I not only did I enjoy this inspired poem, I appreciated the creative format you did it in, as well! Linda |
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Bob K Member Elite
since 2007-11-03
Posts 4208 |
There are some lovely things here, SEA, and the photo is lovely as well. Thank you for these. BobK. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Susan...Great write, enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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