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The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18
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0 posted 2008-08-12 01:40 PM

Nervous lips trembled
As the angel blinked
Back tears

Grasping for
Her savior’s
Hand

As she leaned
Into his
Strong embrace

Lulled to sleep
By his
Comforting heartbeat

And the reassuring
Sweet nothings
Murmured into her ear
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1 posted 2008-08-12 02:41 PM

very nice
bernie

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2 posted 2008-08-12 04:09 PM

Yo The Shadow in Blue,

Sounds all right to me.

Love Bobby
The Shadow in Blue
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3 posted 2008-08-13 01:08 PM

Thanks for your reply Bernie.

Bobby,good sir, your reply made smile. Thanks.
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