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martiniat8
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0 posted 2008-08-10 06:10 PM


Pray the prayer of deliverance
may God seperate the wheat from the chaff
may your enemies be scattered unto the winds
may they flee before you

as the harvest draws nigh
may he bless you with your true brethren
may your house be filled to over flowing
with love, grace and peace

to those that serve and love
the one true God
and the three fold spirit
of the trinity

may the blessings, gifts and presence of the Holy Spirit
be with you today and forever more
may your steps be numbered
and your path be clear, free from pitfalls

may the bones of your enemies be crushed
may they be filled with shame
for there is salvation for those who seek it
Seek it, breathe it, drink it

and you shall see
you shall hear
you shall speak
and you shall walk

with his presence
his strength
his peace
and joy

forever more

Amen


"For those that know a god they understand, they have created unto themselves an idol" ~Augustine

[This message has been edited by martiniat8 (08-10-2008 08:33 PM).]

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Danny Cobb
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since 2008-07-09
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1 posted 2008-08-10 07:11 PM


what a Psalmlike prayer-poem you have brought forth! it seems to have a sense of scriptural poetry, of blessings and blastings!
[ note: you may want to change the word SHAFT to CHAFF (which i think you meant) and the spelling of BRETHERN to BRETHREN ]

  all in all a satisfying prayer poem.

  danny cobb

martiniat8
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2 posted 2008-08-10 08:36 PM


Thanks Danny, yes this was inspired by Psalms 53. So, good insight. I also made the spelling corrections you suggested. Although I often feel the chaff is giving me the shaft :P
poddarku
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india
3 posted 2008-10-19 10:59 AM


this is a soulful poetry
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2008-10-19 11:03 AM


This is a wonderful prayer that I will keep close, it speaks to me of Gods endless love.

Bless you~

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