Open Poetry #43 |
Deliverance |
martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Pray the prayer of deliverance may God seperate the wheat from the chaff may your enemies be scattered unto the winds may they flee before you as the harvest draws nigh may he bless you with your true brethren may your house be filled to over flowing with love, grace and peace to those that serve and love the one true God and the three fold spirit of the trinity may the blessings, gifts and presence of the Holy Spirit be with you today and forever more may your steps be numbered and your path be clear, free from pitfalls may the bones of your enemies be crushed may they be filled with shame for there is salvation for those who seek it Seek it, breathe it, drink it and you shall see you shall hear you shall speak and you shall walk with his presence his strength his peace and joy forever more Amen "For those that know a god they understand, they have created unto themselves an idol" ~Augustine [This message has been edited by martiniat8 (08-10-2008 08:33 PM).] |
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Danny Cobb Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 74 |
what a Psalmlike prayer-poem you have brought forth! it seems to have a sense of scriptural poetry, of blessings and blastings! [ note: you may want to change the word SHAFT to CHAFF (which i think you meant) and the spelling of BRETHERN to BRETHREN ] all in all a satisfying prayer poem. danny cobb |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Thanks Danny, yes this was inspired by Psalms 53. So, good insight. I also made the spelling corrections you suggested. Although I often feel the chaff is giving me the shaft :P |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
this is a soulful poetry |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is a wonderful prayer that I will keep close, it speaks to me of Gods endless love. Bless you~ |
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