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Open Poetry #43

Glen Park

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-10-19 03:14 AM

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I have
A younger brother
I take care of

I comb his hair
Sometimes I move him
In the sun

He writes poems
That are beyond
My sympathies
Or comprehension
Which I post then
For all to see

I love him
Without understanding
How it is
That he can be—

He asks me
To say again
That he misses you

Though for the life of me
I don’t know why

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[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (10-19-2008 08:12 PM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-10-19 05:17 AM

I am ever so glad that you move your younger self sometimes in the sun, dear John.

Wonderfully eloquent.

Love,
Margherita

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

2 posted 2008-10-19 08:14 AM

Thank you John, I wish I could read his poems, ,wonderful read.

yann

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